The topic of this writing, is on the importance of education
for young children. This topic was simple for me, considering I work at a day
care with young children and I am going to school for early childhood
education. I wrote about how important it is for young children to be educated.
It is so hard for people to understand, what you learn early on will carry on
to adulthood. It shows points on the importance of early childhood educators
and the knowledge they bring to be able to teach children.
This paper has errors, but it's the best paper I have written in my composition 2 class. I believe it was well written and had thorough thoughts about the importance of education for young children.
To make this paper better, I feel I should have talked to people in the field to help me write more about personable information on teachers, who have even more knowledge than I have. This paper was my better paper this semester. I am very proud of this paper and do not think I would have included much more. I did learn more research information on the poverty levels, it shows there needs to be better programs for children and families whom cannot afford high price schooling. I also learned the state I live in ranks lower in education funding, which I had not idea. I think I could have placed my cited information in better places. Overall, I was pleased with this paper.
This paper has errors, but it's the best paper I have written in my composition 2 class. I believe it was well written and had thorough thoughts about the importance of education for young children.
To make this paper better, I feel I should have talked to people in the field to help me write more about personable information on teachers, who have even more knowledge than I have. This paper was my better paper this semester. I am very proud of this paper and do not think I would have included much more. I did learn more research information on the poverty levels, it shows there needs to be better programs for children and families whom cannot afford high price schooling. I also learned the state I live in ranks lower in education funding, which I had not idea. I think I could have placed my cited information in better places. Overall, I was pleased with this paper.