This essay was written last year at the beginning, of my start of college for my child development course. The topic was to catch a certain audience on a topic I didn’t actually agree on. I had to make people believe I was for the topic. I decided to write this essay on why parents should not take their children to daycare. I do know some reason people could say why they wouldn’t want to take their children, but in all honesty I do not think it is a bad idea to take your kid to a daycare. I work at a daycare and I know we take care of the children and their health, but some places you just do not know what goes on. Many people in the world are not mentally stable to take care of kids.
I do not believe it was written to my full potential. There are many mistakes, as well as not complete thoughts. I wish I would have given myself proper time to actually take my time and write my complete thoughts. I did hit all of the points on why people do not take their children to daycare.
I believe I should have researched more to make my essay longer and not stop so abruptly. I needed more on my last paragraph. I didn’t really fully finish that thought. I also needed a summary paragraph at the end to finish off the essay properly. I also needed to start the essay before a couple of day before the due date. I have learned you need to research the topic that your paper is on to gain more knowledge about it. I also learned I could ask people around me to get more insight on what the people think, considering they could possibly be my audience for the paper I am writing.
I do not believe it was written to my full potential. There are many mistakes, as well as not complete thoughts. I wish I would have given myself proper time to actually take my time and write my complete thoughts. I did hit all of the points on why people do not take their children to daycare.
I believe I should have researched more to make my essay longer and not stop so abruptly. I needed more on my last paragraph. I didn’t really fully finish that thought. I also needed a summary paragraph at the end to finish off the essay properly. I also needed to start the essay before a couple of day before the due date. I have learned you need to research the topic that your paper is on to gain more knowledge about it. I also learned I could ask people around me to get more insight on what the people think, considering they could possibly be my audience for the paper I am writing.