This essay was written in my Child Development, introduction class last year. This essay is my philosophy of guiding young children’s behavior, dealing with toddlers. I wrote about toddlers, since I was in a toddler class at the day care I work for at the time. I was able to use experiences on what I saw with how their minds worked along with my education I had been receiving from school.
For writing this on my first year with still being in basic composition, I do believe it was well-written. Looking back at it now, I find many mistakes and I am able to point them out. I have many run-on sentences and commas in the wrong spots and even some where I do not need them. I am very pleased with the contents of this paper and think I have included everything that I truly wanted to say and believed, working with children.
I learned how to put all of my thoughts on my beliefs on children’s behaviors and how I believe children learn best in writing. I put everything in my paper that I still believe to this day. This is still my philosophy on guiding young children and I have not needed to update it with any new ideas, which makes me very proud of this writing. To get to be able to read this and reflect on it is enjoyable. I am very proud of the contents of this paper and did not think I was going to be able to write it when my professor told us about the assignment, but I worked really hard on it and got a good grade.
For writing this on my first year with still being in basic composition, I do believe it was well-written. Looking back at it now, I find many mistakes and I am able to point them out. I have many run-on sentences and commas in the wrong spots and even some where I do not need them. I am very pleased with the contents of this paper and think I have included everything that I truly wanted to say and believed, working with children.
I learned how to put all of my thoughts on my beliefs on children’s behaviors and how I believe children learn best in writing. I put everything in my paper that I still believe to this day. This is still my philosophy on guiding young children and I have not needed to update it with any new ideas, which makes me very proud of this writing. To get to be able to read this and reflect on it is enjoyable. I am very proud of the contents of this paper and did not think I was going to be able to write it when my professor told us about the assignment, but I worked really hard on it and got a good grade.