The topic of this paper is how watching television does not make you smarter. This topic is not one, I really had knowledge on besides basic common sense. I had to do some research on the subject. I found some information on the subject. The information on the internet was some information I already knew about.
I have many mistakes in this paper. I used first person in this paper, while I was supposed to be getting away from it. I learned titles needed to be italicized while in an essay. I had words that were confusing for the readers to read. I also had some commas in the wrong place and there were missing in some spots of the essay. I could have been more thorough than I was in this paper. I wish I would have had a friend read through it to help me hear it from somebody else, to help me be able to fix my mistakes.
I wish I gave myself more time on this paper and also had someone else read through to help me catch some mistakes. I wish I would have found better research on the subject to help me write about more on the subject. I learned in this writing, titles of movies or books need to be italicized, which is something I never learned in composition 1 or even basic composition. I am sure glad I learned now for future writings I will have to write. I learned how hard it is to write a paper on a subject I know nothing about. Television is not something that is importance of me, I watch television when I have time, just to help me relax but it’s not important to me, as I have no time for it anyways.
I have many mistakes in this paper. I used first person in this paper, while I was supposed to be getting away from it. I learned titles needed to be italicized while in an essay. I had words that were confusing for the readers to read. I also had some commas in the wrong place and there were missing in some spots of the essay. I could have been more thorough than I was in this paper. I wish I would have had a friend read through it to help me hear it from somebody else, to help me be able to fix my mistakes.
I wish I gave myself more time on this paper and also had someone else read through to help me catch some mistakes. I wish I would have found better research on the subject to help me write about more on the subject. I learned in this writing, titles of movies or books need to be italicized, which is something I never learned in composition 1 or even basic composition. I am sure glad I learned now for future writings I will have to write. I learned how hard it is to write a paper on a subject I know nothing about. Television is not something that is importance of me, I watch television when I have time, just to help me relax but it’s not important to me, as I have no time for it anyways.